It begins with a light graze of a fingertip followed by a sharp pinch of a nipple. A sharp intake of breath as I see the dark gaze in your eyes. A firm flick of a fingertip followed by more torturous teasing.
Tracing invisible lines along soft flesh, another pinch, another flick. Teasing exposed skin the ministrations of your hands.
Helpless I lay there watching you peruse my body with your eyes looking for the next vunerable spot to inflict pleasure or pain. A culmination of erotic torture and arousal.
Fingertips changes to slaps, brought to the edge from your fingers playing a dance around my clit. My hips begin to rise in tune with the melody your palms play out. Reddened thighs tenderised with angry raised welts to match the storm in my mind. I slink inside myself to escape the pain only to sing back to you as palms meet skin. You play me like a violin, pulling at my strings, one by one until you build me to a crescendo.
Denying my body the one thing it craves you play me over and over. I am the instrument and you are my musician.
Make me sing.
moltenthought
on Aug 18th, 2009
@ 16:25:
Singing is good for the soul!
PapaTomLA
on Aug 18th, 2009
@ 16:36:
very erotic – the same metaphor had struck me earlier.
“the storm in my mind” – loved that phrase, it fits so well…
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remittance girl
on Aug 18th, 2009
@ 16:37:
Nice! You’ve got a little typo “Teasing exposed skin the the ministrations of your hands” (one too many ‘the’s).
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vanimp
on Aug 18th, 2009
@ 16:39:
Lol I am norty I never edit until *after* fankoo
Gray
on Aug 18th, 2009
@ 16:45:
Beautifully written. I am easily lost in your words.
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nettagyrl
on Aug 19th, 2009
@ 14:32:
This is a beautiful piece describing the painful pleasure she is going through. Nice.
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vanimp
on Aug 19th, 2009
@ 20:14:
@Tom Yes storms are something familiar in my head too
@Gray Well noe that’s flattering
@nettagyrl Thank you