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Microfantasy Monday ~ Angst

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desire to inflict pain
veracity in words
contradiction
the need to feel pain
desire to hurt
at the core of the soul
mind in turmoil
disquiet
eyes white with fear
emotion in conflict
a sense of unease
deep within the recesses of the mind
sighing deeply
with teeth
sensation dispates
dark realms of desire
pain finds its place
she sobs
the demons released

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10 Responses to “Microfantasy Monday ~ Angst”


  1. Nolens Volens
    on Jun 9th, 2009
    @ 04:05

    I’ll bite you for some relief. ;)


  2. PapaTomLA
    on Jun 9th, 2009
    @ 10:08

    I love consise poetry – i was taught that you should remove every sylable that isn’t absolutely necessary. Nice way to present inner conflict, in a way I can readily identify with. Thank you.

    PapaTomLA’s last blog post..Microfantasy Monday #31


  3. Lilly
    on Jun 9th, 2009
    @ 11:31

    I love the pic, first. It’s….yeah.
    And that first part I really GET. That need to hurt with words and hold onto the hurt coming back at me for a bit.

    Lilly’s last blog post..Lilly’s Turn – Part 3: Wherein Lust, Greed and Risk Intersect


  4. Rafi
    on Jun 9th, 2009
    @ 14:53

    I can identify with this – big time! Not to mention the demons – and my demons.

    Rafi’s last blog post..War at home?


  5. selkie
    on Jun 10th, 2009
    @ 22:38

    beautiful, imp! You capture exactly the dichotomy which in the end is resolved in bliss.


  6. vanimp
    on Jun 10th, 2009
    @ 22:47

    @Nolens Volens, You big tease :P


  7. vanimp
    on Jun 10th, 2009
    @ 22:47

    @PapaTomLA, The KISS rule ;)


  8. vanimp
    on Jun 10th, 2009
    @ 22:48

    @Lilly, Yep even writing it was an interesting process, forming emotions into words and the picture just fit with the poem x


  9. vanimp
    on Jun 10th, 2009
    @ 22:49

    @Rafi, Inner demons are always interesting to wrestle with Rafi *smiles*


  10. vanimp
    on Jun 10th, 2009
    @ 22:49

    @selkie, Thank you hunni :arrow:

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