fighting, clawing
desperate to escape
it’s tendrils devouring,
spreading its hold
consciousness fading
the blackness begins to seep in
she fights, silent screams
pleading eyes
His lips on hers
eyes silent yet knowing
breathing ceases
a moment of nothingness
she is dangling on the edge
He is her breath
He has her life on his lips
her eyes widen
her cunt twitches
the lust in his eyes
a moment longer…
His lips release
the suction released
she breathes
again
.. “more”, she asks
breathless
glassy eyed
she smiles
Dragon Mage
on Apr 27th, 2009
@ 14:55:
Oh my. You have once more captured so much with just a few words. And DAMN that’s hot. ^_^
vanimp
on Apr 27th, 2009
@ 15:01:
lowflykiwi
on Apr 27th, 2009
@ 23:45:
Wow, I started my MfM last night, but got side tracked…
Still have an hour to go though 
Your HOT Microfantasy has me thinking I might have to lift my game. 
Kiwi
moltenthought
on Apr 28th, 2009
@ 06:05:
One word: breathe. Oh my dat one hawt kiss. x
vanimp
on Apr 28th, 2009
@ 10:06:
@kiwi Nice to see another Kiwi writing a few erotic pieces
yours was not half bad too!
@Molten yush breathe darlink *giggle*
Thursday's Child
on Apr 28th, 2009
@ 14:56:
Mmm, beautifully done – I would not have thought of using breath control for the suction theme!
SweetSpiced
on Apr 28th, 2009
@ 18:07:
Now that’s truly a kiss to remember. Love the choice of poetry to capture the images.
Kyle
on Apr 30th, 2009
@ 14:41:
Oooh, breath play, nice use of the theme.. very hot