The embers glowed with an essence of their own. Nightfall descending and spreading it’s lithe finger’s across the sky casually masking out the sun. The faint glimmer of a full moon settling in. The waterside with it’s eerie calm, darkness creating a depth of unknown. She casually bends forward and picks up a handful of wet sand and lays it’s cool blanket over the fresh red welts on her thighs. She sighs as it relieves the heat emanating from beneath her skin and smiles. She glances over to the sculptured torso laid down upon the comfortable rug she is sat upon and feels a twitching in her cunt as she remembers the hour just been. “A coffee Sir?”, her voice husky, still coming back down to earth after her ordeal. Reminders on her body of the rope, the cane and the scrapings and grazes from the bark of the tree that stands behind them. He smiles and admires her naked skin glowing from the fire, “That would be lovely pet”. She remembers why she loves camping so much as she listens to the silence around them. The only noise, the flickering of the fire and the familiar clunking of the billy tin.
BB
on Feb 23rd, 2009
@ 21:59:
I like it, I am going to write something on my page for a microfantasy monday too.
vanimp
on Feb 23rd, 2009
@ 22:28:
And where may I look?
Tristan's pet
on Feb 23rd, 2009
@ 23:21:
ooo I like that one! Very evocative. I hope to do that one day with sir.
Tp xx
selkie
on Feb 23rd, 2009
@ 23:48:
OK, I DESPISE camping… but if any camping I ever participated in was like this, I very well might reconsider my ban on the outdoor life …
Dragon Mage
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 00:40:
Very nice. Lovely images evoked. What a great way to start the morning.
Sage
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 03:41:
Sounds like fun to me…
Miss Honey
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 04:47:
Oh, so love this idea. I want to take such a trip. So nicely written, could almost feel the fire and see the welts.
vanimp
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 09:08:
I enjoyed writing this piece, it’s good to be back writing these
… bah some of the new writers have that commenting system that I seem to have issues with so I can’t pop in a comment 
vanimp
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 09:09:
:O I changed your mind about camping selkie? LOL
T. Elle Harrison
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 10:19:
I really hate camping. I’m a city girl at heart but for this fantasy…I’d brave the great outdoors.
Thursday's Child
on Feb 24th, 2009
@ 13:01:
Oh, I love this – the unexpected twist of a D/s scene while camping. Very poignant and very real!
Kyle
on Feb 25th, 2009
@ 15:30:
yes, kinky camping, very nice
Dracona
on Feb 26th, 2009
@ 02:50:
Beautiful writing. I haven’t been camping since I was a kid…now you’ve made me want to.